Good afternoon I was come by and I was drawn into your poem with by the title and the description. You are so right Only One Aretha. She was the queen of soul that is for sure.
As I continued into your poem I was captivated and so drawn into your poem as you weave your web of storying telling inside this beautiful poem. You really do have a way with words. I love the way this poem makes me feel. I did not see any errors at all. This is a very creative, clever and unique piece. There is something about the start of fall! I enjoyed the whole poem and could not possibly choose just one line as a favorite!
Keep writing and Sharing. I would give this poem a rating of five stars had you allowed ratings!



Sunny





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