Hello Prosperous Snow



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

I love this poem. It's makes me want to go outside and share memories with family and friends around a bonfire.

The imagery is great, I can see the scarecrows dancing around the fire. The rhythm moves the poem alone at a good pace. Each line has a good flow as they drift into each other.
Good use of the prompt word. And I feel you followed the form.

I inhale the chill of an autumn dawn,
sigh and sweep the cobwebs from my mind
try to push away another hour of sleep

I like how these three lines come together.

Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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