Hi Brian ~ Kognitive DissonanCe , I'm really glad I found this. Here's what I about {item: 1222886} -

1) I love it that you published an entire book of poetry themed on love for nature!


2) My favourite lines are:

Let time breathe inside your branching heart.
Emerge invisibly; dance back into dry eyes.

The first line evoked a fast-forward series of images of a leaf growing and its veins stretching out. The second line reminded me of how we often fail to notice such magic, and remain unmoved by the miracles happening all around us.


3) Since WDC has more learning writers and poets (I'm one of those) than published and truly accomplished ones, I thought it might be more helpful if you included the form you're using for this poem, whether it's free verse or a traditional form or even an original one. I am quite intrigued about your three-line verses, which reminds me of haikus (often about nature) but don't really follow the structure.


Thanks for a great read!

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