Hello Lucinda,



🌹My Thoughts: I really enjoyed your poem. It's always a blessing when we have someone there for us at our best and our worst. I've always loved that quote by Marilyn Monroe "If you can't handle me at my worst, you don't deserve me at my best". I really enjoyed the structure and flow of your poem. I think the words you used really expressed your love for this person. The message I got from your poem is that this person keeps you going each day with the thought of seeing them again.

🌷My Favorite Part: I liked the second stanza where you mention them seeing the monster in you and not running away. My mom used to always tell me that we our our worst critiques, people tend to see us better than we see ourselves sometimes.

🌲My Suggestions: I didn't see any distractions. This poem was wonderful.

Sincerely,
MoonFae
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