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 Susan and Pete  [E]
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by Jacky
Review of Susan and Pete  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This story is just BEAUTIFUL! I treasure it! I loved the entire setting, I loved the Denouement, I loved the conclusion (that was truly inspirational!) At first, I thought--this is two people working together at a task, possibly clandestine. Next thought--home invasion, oh dear, poor potential victim. Then--(sorry, it is October) Demon Possession. Thankfully, you proved me wrong!
Finally, I learned the "truth" of the story, and this great line:
" Living next to the cemetery I’ve seen plenty." Amen on that one! Everything from then on so warmed my heart and encouraged my mind. So glad I read this story!

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