Hello Keaton Foster



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

A poem full of meaning and emotion. The rhythm is good and moves the poem along at a good pace. It looks nice on the page.

A suggestion or two would be to add some punctuation throughout the poem it helps the flow of the poem. Also each line doesn't have to be capitalized. If the line ends with a comma the next line can be lower case.

Adding your emotions and feeling to the poem gives it something extra and you have captured that something with this poem.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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