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Review of The game of Chess  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

This is indeed a good entertaining piece. It has good rhythm. Yes, Chess is the most complex game. Though It has too many tactics but it is an interesting game. I learned all the moves in my childhood.
The words are pure, honest, but very true. Especially last four lines are humorous. It made me laugh

They left their King unguarded
Now if I move my Rook....
Oh no! Oh damn! Checkmate again?
Stuff this, I’ll read a book!

I could relate to it. I enjoyed it.

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