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Heartbeat  [E]
I still feel a heartbeat.
by Skeyler J. Graeyson
Review of Heartbeat  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Heartbeat"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

I like this Inspirational poem. I like the way you put your feelings into words. I like the enchanted picture you have painted here. The tone I find this poem is positive, soothing like cool embrace. your poem has good message that Darkness is not the absence of light and it is wonderful to see the sun after the rain. I found this in this lines

A heartbeat that has been through all of the trials and darkness of life.
A heart that has lived on through it all.

I enjoyed it reading.

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