Hello Raghav R

Title

The title is good and it works with the poem, however, I had to read all the poem before it fit. I don't feel it set the tone or perspective of the poem. But it does entice the reader to step inside and read.



There is good rhythm, the rhyming scheme helps with that. And the way it looks on the page helps with the rhythm. Each line flows nicely into the next.



The imagery is good, I could see the story unfold as I read the poem. I feel some sadness, not because of death but because peasant was compared to king. And no matter which one you were you meet the same resting place in the end - within the ground.



This poem is interesting to read. It carries a message that in the end we are all treated equal. It also has depth and beauty.


Thank you for sharing.
Keep on writing.



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

Gypsy Ann

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