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 Phantom Falls  [E]
The adventures of four best friends Jessie, Tammy, John and Louie.
by J.Pickett
Review of Phantom Falls  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello!

I just read your story"Phantom Falls" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

I like This adventures story about Jessie, Tammy, John and Louie and how they explores. I especially like the plots and the descriptions. I understand this is the first part of your story. I could imagine where they are.
Your ending seems a little mystery. I think it would be wonderful if you write a little longer.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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