The Story:I like your story. I like the beautiful nature images you have painted here. It makes me connected to the nature. The description are vivid and natural. I like the quick moving plot. I could imagine where the character was. I could feel the sound and color. Though there is no dialogue but your story telling is extremely well.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing.
Happy Writing!
Mina
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