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 Limerick Queen  [E]
Random short story, think of expanding on it.
by Youawakescreaming
Review of Limerick Queen  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This is a lovely image for me from Lizco252!



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I clicked on the Read and Review option and it brought me to your very insightful poem/story combination.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought that the Prince deserved more time, practice and another chance.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* The prince does fine when he's writing about her. When he's writing about himself, he stumbles. But this is a bit of a lesson to follow one's heart.

I think if the prince was encouraged instead of getting a big expert smack-down from the powers that roam the halls, he might just have the courage to follow his heart and his writing dreams.

But if there is a review smack-down (calling itself honest when it's more aptly labeled, "Mean") then the prince might never get to live up to his full potential as the "Poet Prince."

I am probably reading too much into it, but the story hit home with me. I have had my share of smackdowns that kept me down for a while. Always get back up because that is what defeats the bullies and "so-called" experts.

I wasn't sure if, at the end, "closet" should be "closest". We never know who are friends are, until they aren't when it comes to the Internet. A good lesson is to be kind and open to all and then it won't be a problem.

I enjoyed this very much!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been lovely to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2019! My review is honest, but some confuse honest with "mean" around here. I am not (I hope) one of the "mean" ones, but I am honest. *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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