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 Farewell  [E]
A poem of love and heartache.
by Jillian
Review of Farewell  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Farewell"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

This is a beautiful poem about love and heartache.. The title fits your poem.
I like the thoughts evokes in this poem. I like how you put your feelings into words. You displayed beautifully the forms and stages of our emotions.
“My life, it was defined to be,
The angel of your health.
And even here, abandonedly,
From heaven, to this HELL,”

The last stanza makes me realize that love haunt lovers forever which I find in the last lines “The warmth of your strong memory is drying tears that fell
As I must cry...
Farewell”

I like the rhyming. The tone is filled with melancholy but soothing that makes me read your poem to the end.

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