Well, hello there: This was fantastic. I had to read it after the glowing Screams!!! praise and was not disappointed

What I love about your work: Might be easier to list what I don't love, but that wouldn't be a very exciting review. I enjoyed the voice of the story, the details, the intriguing story, and the sudden, abrupt end. I can see this being developed into a full on series going into how the cursed items were retrieved and the nature of their curses once Michael finished devouring them. It was a wonderful read.

Why I could relate to your work: I love horror so how could I pass up on such an intriguing read. You created this dark atmosphere without actually ever delving into gore, it was beautifully done

My suggestions: More? No... that's all I got

Any noticeable typos: There may have been a few, but I was so caught up in the story that I truly didn't notice. You captured a lifetime in a few words, well done.

My favorite line(s): "Buzzing with excitement, a murmuring crowd surrounded the little stage."

Right from the start, you drew us in. And it only got better.

In conclusion: I would definitely read more of this and think the win was well given. Excellent tale, a delicious read indeed




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .