This was very interesting. The darkness at the beginning, and the way you explained it, to me, seems like someone going to sleep and ending up in a dream. We all read and accept or reject based on where we are coming from.

As to those yellow dots, I love seeing pictures of earth from space. You gave good descriptions, drawing the reader in and holding my attention.

I felt you were drawing me further into space, but then you mentioned the wind and I got drawn out a bit, there is no wind in space. Is that what you were writing about?

Infinity mirror? Is that a dream then? Very interesting. As for belonging in reality...that is also interesting. lol
Thanks so much for sharing.
love, LinnAnn