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 Don’t Throw Things In The House  [E]
Oliver and his grandpa have some alone time.
by Paul
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Don’t Throw Things In The House"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

I like this story, and how you crafted the dialogues. It reminds me my grandmother. Her conversations, her affectionate scolding-- come to my mind.

I like the dialogues of your story. It flowed beautifully. I like the emotions evokes in this story. Your prompt was probably to make a story with a specific prompt. Maybe this is why you focused on the dialogues. I like how your story ended.

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