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Juliette   [18+]
A Most Interesting Event! (WDC Sountrackers Contest)
by Mastiff
Review of Juliette  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am doing the I Write in 2019 activity and you posted before me in the forum. It is my pleasure to read your short story, written for the Musicology Anthology activity.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* This story is told in character dialogue and that is certainly an effective way of unfolding the tale. The protagonist, Jimmy, is roped into a big event at the White House, followed by a poker game with the rich and powerful of Washington, including the President. The night is capped off with escorting the fictional First Lady, named Juliette.

I was sort of imagining a combination of Mrs. Kennedy and Mrs. Trump as the glamour puss first lady.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* I enjoyed the notion that someone normal could bring joy into the life of someone who has very little options, but is seen as powerful in their own right.

The story flows well and has some humor and the dialogue reads naturally as one encounters those one does not ordinarily mix with. Jimmy comes through as the class of the bunch.

I enjoyed reading your story.

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. I love to read and send reviews. It has been nice to visit with you!

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2019! My reviews are not meant to be detailed editing suggestions or harsh critiquing endeavors. I just write about what I thought about when I read the work and that's about the size of it. *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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