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Regret and Sorrow  [13+]
I've been down the road of regret and sorrow
by intuey
Review of Regret and Sorrow  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* You sent me a very nice review. I am late with this visit because I was in one of those pits you describe so well. I would get on here, intending to review, then think what is the point. Not a fun place, but I am sorry for the delay.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* The title really does say a lot. Regret is a hard thing, but sorrow. That can break us if we don't watch out. When I have the regretful feelings, I get angry.

The sorrow can lay me out flat. It makes a lot of effort seem pointless.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This part at the beginning was my favorite:

"I've been down the road of
regret and sorrow.
It's littered with tantalizing glass,
sharp metal, and unanswered promises."

Unanswered promises. That is a tricky thing too. It could be a minefield, depending on who is doing the answering.

I thought this was powerful and moving. Sometimes, we read things on here when we are meant to read them. I believe that today I was meant to read your eloquent words. I have a lot of anger that I have to work out about the way some things have been done. That's never an easy or fun journey. But we keep trying to try. That's all that we can do and move forward in life and on here I reckon.

Well done, indeed!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

I am not a fan of editing forays or harsh critiques. Everyone is someone's child on here. Pushed to the side and dismissed am I though so no one should take what I say as a roadmap to follow because I haven't got a clue.

(Maybe) Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2019! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such


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