Hi DahliLlamaDrama,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about two people who spend the night enjoying each other's company when they meet in a bar. I have not had a lot of experience with meeting people in bars. I haven't been to a bar in years, for that matter. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.