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 The Herky-Jerky Wild Turkey  [E]
A comedic poem about a turkey who gets eaten for Thanksgiving.
by Tim Chiu
Review by Sharmelle's...
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

Theme/Subject Matter: "The Herky-Jerky Wild Turkey" is a wonderful poem with great rhythm!!!

Originality/Creativity: Your rhythm emphasizes the poem's emotions greatly.

Emotion/Impact: The main emotional impact is in the fourth stanza.

My Favorite Part: The fourth stanza is my favorite because of the farmer's deal with the bird.

My Suggestions: I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems.

Summary: This poem does a good job of having rhythm and telling a great story in your poem. I would love to read more of your poetry soon.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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