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Review by Cubby
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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         *Penguin* Greetings, Azrael Tseng ! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2019" , *Smile*

         First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. *Smile* Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

Title & Summary
         One Month Plan--Beauty Guaranteed and since it's an entry, there is no summary. *Smile* The title is great! *Bigsmile* Especially after reading your haiku, it totally fits! *Thumbsup*

My First Impression
         I adore this! When I read the first line, I thought, "Okay, I could eat until I'm fat." *Laugh* Then I read your next line, and became aware of what exactly you were writing about. I loved the image of a silk bed, too, and visualized me in a hammock when we go camping. *Wink* And of course the third line reveals the beautiful butterfly. Very nice. So very nice. *Hug*

Punctuation/Grammar/Typos
         *Asteriskb* Perfection.

Other Suggestions
         *Asteriskv* None whatsoever!

Thoughts/Emotions
         *Asterisko* Great imagery. Great piece. *Smile*

         *Starb* My favorite part was visualization of napping in a silk cocoon and waking up beautiful!

*Penguin* Nicely written! Beautiful piece! *Penguin*

*Fisho* Have a great day and *Fishb*
K e e p on W r i t i n g !
~Cubby ")
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