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Clebb Away  [GC]
A juvenile account of fear. Originally written in 2014.
by Laurie Razor
Review of Clebb Away  
Review by Angus
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Rated: GC | (4.5)
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Howdy, Laurie!
This is cool, but the ending was a little ambiguous since you didn't really have reason for Nate winding up where he did, but that's OK. Not all stories have to be explained, and some are even better for the ending to be up to the reader to imagine. Believe me, I've two or three of those myself!
Besides, if it was just an account of juvenile fear, it's fine.
Waking up in a room with no doors or windows in certainly frightening, and you did a nice job getting Nate into one. Freaking doctors who say things like that are crazier than their patients! *Crazy*
Well done, my friend!
Kee ponw ritin gon, thanks for sharing this, and have a wonderful day!

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