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 Acid Attack   [E]
A short poem condemning acid attacks.
by Wacim cejjad
Review of Acid Attack  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Wacim cejjad,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem condemns acid attacks. I have only heard of a handful of people being attacked by having acid thrown at them. It is a terrible thing to happen to a person, and anyone who does things like this must be sick. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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