Hi hullabaloo22,
This is a wonderful story. The tone is full of frustration. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Miranda will go back to her home and her career. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story is about a singer who, tired of not being able to be her own person because of her fame, decides to walk away from everything. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on Miranda, and she comes across as a real person. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The people Miranda encounters while wandering the city speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.