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 The Black Sheep  [E]
Daily Flash Fiction 8/26. 300 words
by addie.cass
Review of The Black Sheep  
Review by Angus
In affiliation with Cross Timbers Groups  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello, Addie!
This is good, and I can see how it won the contest.
Congratulations!
I honestly don't know of a family where one cousin (usually cousins, anyway) didn't have a crush on another cousin, myself included. OK, maybe not a crush, per se, but at least having those same thoughts that your character did!
I've only been to one family reunion, and I wasn't too impressed. Everybody tried to put on a false front, like we all had everything in common (other than blood) and we all enjoyed each other's company, when in reality none of us ever spoke to one another! I think the only the reason we did get together was so my aging grandmother could see all of her progeny together one last time!
I think that's kind of what you were implying with this piece, albeit maybe not so much.
Anyway, well done, my friend!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Addie, and have a great day!

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