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 Review #4503477 |
 | College Chat Room  [18+] Ritualistic game of cat and mouse, and college students?  |
| (4.5)| Hi there, Victor! This is a really unique piece, and I don't think I've seen this style entered in 'SCREAMS!!!' before. At first glance I thought it was a screen play!  I like this bizarre chat room murder scenario where Courtney being threatened and scared to death, and their cyber conversation was quite engaging. At least from somebody who was on the outside and not partaking in it!  You had some pretty graphic images in it with Alexis being gutted like a fish, and you certainly got a 10 on the creep factor! One thing I noticed though is at that the beginning you refer to Courtney as a guy, and then while he waits for a reply from his first message you refer to him as a 'she'. Also, I'm not too sure how Courtney's death scene would play out in a chat room. In other words, surely Courtney wouldn't have been typing out her final words such as 'Heeeeelp Meeee' and 'Noooo please don't do this to me', right? Otherwise, nice job! My favorite part was where Paul answered the 911 call: '911, my name is Paul how can I kill you.'  Kee ponw ritin gon, Victor! It was a pleasure to read, have a great day, and I hope to see more of your entries in "SCREAMS!!!" in the future!
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