Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! Hello again, Riveting Rives! This is another of your dark yet really good poems, and once again I'm impressed with your unique 'voice'! I think I mentioned that I love horror and everything dark, so to read this was a real treat. Your style might be a little jumpy, or so it seems to me, but since I'm no expert on poetry I probably shouldn't be judging. It was enough just to keep up with those dark references you made to the scarecrow and the ravens! As for imagery, I can picture this scarecrow out there in the field surrounded by stalks of corn as the ravens swoop around him, cawing their message... FOREVERMORE! Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! Thanks for sharing this, and have a wonderful day! PS-Love that title! So appropriate!
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