Good morning I found this wonderful little story and Fall is my most favorite season of all so I had to come on in and I found a sweet perfect little story of a fall afternoon. This is just something about Fall, am I right? You do have a way with words as you know just how to make your readers feel. I enjoy this little story a nice vivid story that I can picture and feel the fall upon me. I did not see any error at all. Nicely written and I like it made me feel. Keep sharing and keep writing. I am giving this short story a five-star rating.

Courtesy of: "Days Of Sunshine" 

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .