Hi mike,
This is a wonderful story. The tone is full of frustration. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if this copywriter is having a practical joke played on him. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story is about a copywriter who is having a day full of unusual clients. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across a few structural issues that need your attention:

1)"No your not"-"your" should be "you're".

2)"It's Rudyard Kipling sir, why don't you believe me."-This is a question mark and needs to end with a question mark.

3)In a few places you have neglected to begin sentences with a capital letter.

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.