Hi RyanRight,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with bitterness. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is wrapped up in thoughts about the failures in their life. I try not to live in the past and always look forward. I learn from my mistakes, but that's the most that my failures enter my mind. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.