Hello Lilli 🧿 ☕ }! I'm reviewing Hunger from My 24 Syllable Notebook  today from "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  for "I Write in 2019" !


Keep in mind that I'm merely basing my review on my own personal interpretation of your work. Please, do not feel obligated to use any suggestions that may lie within.

Hopefully, you'll find this review helpful and encouraging!


Overall Impressions:

Hahaha! I read this poem with such a pretentious attitude and stuffy demeanor that all I could do was laugh. Like I imagine a version of Cruella Deville, her pointy nose in the air, scoffing at the idea.

Plus, I totally get it. Yeah, you're hungry but do you really want to eat at a filthy establishment? I don't know, cause sometimes the worst hole in the walls can have the best food!!

Conventions:

This was written for "Invalid Item"  contest and you stayed within the requirements keeping the poem at a maximum of 24 syllables and using the prompt word of the day, providing us with a note of it's meaning at the bottom. Well done!

Suggestions:

Keep a snack in your purse for times like this, that's my suggestion.


Additional Comments:

Nicely done, Lilly. I love the challenge of 24 Syllables and you created quite the humorous piece for it. I don't know if that was your intention but every time I read it, I can't help but giggle. I hope you won "Invalid Item"  and I wish you luck in all your endeavors for "I Write in 2019" .

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