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Laughter of the Gargoyle   [E]
Personification of a Gargoyle
by L.A. Grawitch
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Laughter of the Gargoyle "  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

This is a beautiful poem. I appreciate the simplicity, and the thought woven in this poem.

*Bulletg* TITLE: The title of the poem fits for the contest.

*Bulletg* IMAGERY:I like the beautiful images of a mythological character gargoyle you have painted here. The poet imagined a gargoyle and he could watched what was taking place below. The descriptions are well written and very vivid. There was a comic touch to everything that would make the readers want to take a ride through Gargoyle‘s world

*Bulletg* RHYMING & REPETITION:Your rhyming is pleasing to the ear. The tone is soothing that makes me read your poem to the end.

*Bulletg* RHYTHM:Your poem has nice rhythm.

*Bulletg* FAVORITE LINES: As I sit in my spot, one final thought
Theses loony souls, just need to be taught


*Bulletg* STRUCTURE & FORM:you have beautiful thoughts inside every line. I like how each lines breaks.

*Bulletg* THEME: I enjoy the images, colors and sounds this poem.

*Bulletg* OVERALL IMPRESSION :I enjoyed your poem. It’s well written.

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