Hello, ridinghhood-p.boutilier
I'm sending this review as part of I Write in 2019. You posted before me, so here is my review.

My Impression
This poem had my interest with the first line. I love the imagery of "morning glory sky," This is a short poem, but loaded with meaning.

I also like "Mangrove leaves excrete salt tears..."

A lovely morning, fall poem. Well done!


Suggestions
I would suggest having a drop note with the form information included. That way people don't have to google what the form entails. Otherwise, I have no suggestions.

Grammar/Punctuation/Usage
I didn't notice anything here.

Rating Explanation
I'm giving this a 5. I love the imagery and language. Happy Halloween and Happy birthday! Also, good luck in the Oriental poetry contest!

IceSkating SugarCube

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