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Review #4510831
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 Mary Florence Chaplin Newland  [E]
To My Maternal Grandmother
by Prosperous Snow celebrating
Review by Cubby
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Prosperous Snow celebrating ! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2019" . *Smile* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

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*Ghost* Boo-boos*Wind*
         *Tack* Could not scare up anything!

*Ghost* Goodies *Jackolantern*

         *Candy6* I love your flow, Neva, the places you've chosen to break up each line is perfecto!

         *Candy5* The following lines are awesome...
Mama
was a single mother
who worked swing shift and weekends,

         *Candy8* Nice imagery throughout. *Smile*

*Ghost* Chillin' & Thrillin'*Moon*

         *Wolf* My favorite lines...
and the way she played solitaire
when she couldn't sleep.
My grandma played solitaire, too, and did crossword puzzles from the TV Guide and newspaper.
Grandmas are wonderful! Thank you for sharing your grandmother's memory. *Heart*

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*Cat* Have a great day and...*Cat2*
*Jackolantern*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Jackolantern*

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