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Hello! I found your story on at Read & Review. I'm with the WDC Angel Army. I enjoyed reading it and I hope you find this feedback useful. *Cool*


*Tackb* - Overall Impression:
I like the way you wrote this because this is how I feel when I have writer's Block which I do have sometimes. So it makes sense to me.


*Tack* - Hook:
NONE


*Tackb* - Style and Voice:
I think you got style and I like the way you wrote that.


*Tack* - Scene/Setting:
I picture myself in a room with my computer trying to find the words to write a story.


*Tackb* - Characters:
NONE


*Tack* - Dialogue:
I like the dialogue and I think you did well.


*Tackb* - Grammar and Mechanics:
I don't see any problems at all.


*Tack* - Suggestions:
The only suggestion I would say, keep on writing and you are doing a great job.



Thank you for sharing your story. Write On!


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