Hello, ridinghhood-p.boutilier
I'm sending this review as part of I Write in 2019. You posted before me, so here is my review.

My Impression
I've always been a big fan of the 24 syllables contest because it's both open and restricting at the same time. It's always a joy to see what people do with it. I love this idea of us always being broken in one way or another. Brokenness also has different meanings as well. We can be broken as in downtrodden and destroyed, or we can be broken and humble, as though to a higher power. It's this last line here that has me most captivated. Nicely done!

Suggestions
No suggestions.

Grammar/Punctuation/Usage
I didn't notice anything here.

Rating Explanation
Within the restrictive confines of 24 syllables, you have nailed an interesting concept. Good luck in the contest!

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