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The Battle of Burger Joint  [18+]
A Journey Through Genres Entry
by Mastiff
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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What brought OctOGRE thIng meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Pointright* I am a judge for the "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest" . Thanks for entering!

What does tHiNg think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think that everyone who has ever had to work for a living will identify with your protagonist. Somewhere along the way a bully boss was encountered. It never seems to lead to anything good. The fight is a way to get some power back I reckon. The line is sort of blurred between good and evil once the trouble boils up.

I could picture it happening and the building rage. Well, you never know what will tip the scales toward catastrophe in one corner and jubilant victory in another. The analogy to the bad step parent scenario seemed to be an apt one.

What does tHiNg applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* The last bit about giving an incorrect name implies that our hero felt this was a doomed adventure right from the start.

I liked picturing the boss in this corner. It was a satisfying conclusion to a troublesome relationship. Very amusing also!

The first person narration is a good choice as it makes it easy for the reader to identify with our hero.

Thanks again for entering the contest and giving me something with a bit of poetic justice and amusement to read!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are my reactions to what I have read. They are not meant to be harsh critiques or wildly critical editing forays because that is not what I enjoy here. I enjoy my reading and seeing what creativity writers bring to the table and I am pleased to read and review your work - well done! I appreciate the work and effort it takes to enter the site contest very much.

This review was written and stored in my review tool on the morning of October 6, 2019. It is to be sent out within 48 hours of when the winners are announced so if it is not timely in any respect, chalk it up to that delay. I was here and did the reading in a timely fashion and I greatly enjoyed the experience.

Making a Difference One Review at a Time in 2019! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 

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