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 Review #4515920 |
 | Bad Coffee  [E] A potential love story murdered by terrible coffee  |
| (4.0)  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! Hello there, Carolyn Stone! For a such short piece, this isn't bad. The idea of a potentially beautiful relationship being blown away by a man's poor brewing of a simple cup of coffee might be hard for some to swallow, since it was such a minor flaw in this man's character. But I guess that just goes to show what good taste you have! HA! Get it? Hard to swallow? Good taste? Sorry. I just had to say that. Anyway, I did enjoy this, mainly for that short and simple 4 word ending. Maybe that really is how some folks judge a potential suitor. Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! Thanks for sharing this, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here! PS-Love that line about the houseplant in your port intro! PSS-You might want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something more about you (hobbies, favorite books/authors, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course. PSSS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies" and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.
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