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Seduction In The Snow  [18+]
Frolickin' in the snow
by W.D.Wilcox
Review by Angus
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Guten tag, Bill!
Have you no couth, man? Displaying a poem about one of your sexual encounters during the Christmas season?
Seriously though, you know I love your writing, no matter what it is, but I think this is the first poem of yours I’ve read. I totally understand you wanting to try something a little different (I wonder how the Eskimos do it?), and I commend you on your valiant attempt, but maybe you should have been more prepared for this polar tryst.
Viagra, perhaps? *Laugh*
The rhyming was excellent, as was the meter. But that ending was what made this shine!
Like I said, I still give you three thumbs up for trying! *Thumbsupl* *Thumbsupl* *Thumbsupl*
Kee ponw riting on, my friend! Thanks for sharing this, thanks for the laughs, and have a wonderful Thanksgiving!

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