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Review #4518092
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 Through the keyhole   [18+]
A story of a young mans travels
by MrDaryl
Review by Angus
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Greetings, MrDaryl!
For your first piece on here, this isn't bad. It's certainly interesting, since at first I thought it was going to be based on a true story (or a real experience), but that last paragraph proved me wrong!
UNLESS...this son coming over to your place in England somehow slipped through the cracks with his crazy application actually managed to get over there! *Shock2*
Hey, stranger things have happened!
But since you have this under 'fantasy', I'm going with that! *Bigsmile*
So far, so good, MrDaryl! I'm interested to see how your trip to Texas unravels, mainly because I live in this state. But not for long, thank God! I'm moving back to my home state of California this summer!
Anyway, kee ponw ritin gon, my friend, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
PS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies"  and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.

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