GU35T,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is filled with contentment and peace. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is completely absorbed by the emotions in the story. They will read to the last word. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story is about a blind boy who is enjoying the company of his best friend-his pet. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is well developed and believable. The story concentrates on the blind boy, and he comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.