Hello, ridinghhood-p.boutilier
I'm sending this review as part of I Write in 2019. You posted before me, so here is my review.

My Impression
I found this poem to be utterly lovely. I liked the realness of this poem, as I find a lot of art depicts Joseph, Mary, and baby Jesus as unbelievable superhuman saints, as in the old Christmas cards where they all had halos. This is a refreshing read.


Suggestions
No suggestions. I nontraditional, yet striking Christmas poem.


Grammar/Punctuation/Usage
I didn't notice anything here.

Rating Explanation
This is a 5, for sure. I enjoyed reading it and good luck in the contest!

IceSkating SugarCube

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