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Rated: GC | (5.0)
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Aloha, Cat!
Damn! Does your imagination have NO bounds?
I don't know whether I'm more impressed with the style you wrote this in, or the subject matter of it, but either way it's remarkable! And a very fascinating look into the mind of this creature that I'm assuming is a cat.
What's more is you told a chronological story of the cat being taken home from the shelter on the first day all the way through their time spent in that shelter as the world dissolved around them from that nuclear attack!
Mind boggling!
Now don't get me wrong if I got this wrong, because you never actually came out and told us what was happening, but you left enough hints in this that's probably what happened! And I don't think I'd be alone in making this assumption. But if I totally missed base with this, then PLEASE tell me what really happened here! I know animals can't speak, CAT, but you can apparently type! *Laugh*
I honestly don't what else to say or make of this, my friend! It's certainly horror, but in a subtle and whole different subgenre! There's so many emotions your protagonist shows, but mostly anger (from being in that tiny cage at the beginning) and sadness (from when 'Little One' dies at the end), and you displayed them perfectly with this!
And even though Curvy One has left you and returned to her first house, you will stay beside Little One's side since it's your job to protect her...
*Cry*
Okay. Enough of that. Time to go announce the winner.
Kee ponw ritin gon, Cat! I've said it before, but when you publish your first New York Times bestseller, don't forget about me!
PS-My only regret is that I can only give this 5 stars, because it deserves at least 100!


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