This is a great poem and I have no criticism whatsoever

Hello Dave , Not Suki here. Let's begin.

From what I could gather, this is a poem about waking up and having coffee This instilled that relaxing moment like a photograph or a video. It kind of made me feel nostalgic since the last time I drank coffee outside and just be mindful of what is happening, it was in my elementary days (PS: They were mushroom coffee and sometimes even rice coffee, no caffeine so it's good for kids.) This is probably also about that, being mindful of what is happening and just appreciate it.

(PS: Sorry, getting sidetracked) Anyways, overall your poem is awesome. Rhymes, beat, story, heck--coffee. A great ingredient for a poem Apologies if I don't know how to criticize this, it's already great!

Yours sincerely,
beginnerwrath