Valentines [E] written for The Writer's Cramp, for my husband, prompt: All the valentines in the world |
A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! Greetings ridinghhood-p.boutilier ! What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port? I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest" . Thanks for entering! What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item? I thought about how little one needs all the material trappings of valentines and other remembrances of the day when love is real. All that is needed is the beloved. In future entries, don't forget to include the word/line count (whichever is required). Poetry reading is a very subjective thing. I look for memorable phrasing and lines and stanzas that stay with me, something that stands out with romance and wraps around the heart of the reader (that's me) What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item? I loved that you wrote this for a prompt I gave in W. Cramp. This first line sticks with me: "All the valentines in the world could be shredded to confetti, tossed and recycled, But you would know I still love you." Who needs valentines with a love so fine as this. Bravo! HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps P.S. My reviews are not meant to be harsh edits or critiques. They are my reactions to what I have read and involve sharing my thoughts and feelings. That is how I approach the reading of all romantic poetry. We are asked to pick our favorites and that is what I try to do. My review was written March 8, 2020 and stored in my review tool. We send the reviews out when the winners are announced and we are instructed to do so. If this is not timely, that is why. Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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