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Review #4540524
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 beyond dreaming  [13+]
you always win
by Rhyssa
Review of beyond dreaming  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Lovely Image in March



Greetings Rhyssa !

*Cow**Balloons*

What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest" .
Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think that too much harmony can be dull. I am sympatico with these sentiments. You need some spice and disagreements over the years to liven things up.

Poetry reading is a very subjective thing. I look for memorable phrasing and lines and stanzas that stay with me, something that stands out with romance and wraps around the heart of the reader (that's me)

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This is my favorite part:

"somehow, as we grow together,
our little differences
that once jangled against my nerves
are swallowed in the big harmonies
we create together"

I wouldn't change a thing, either. Well done!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are not meant to be harsh edits or critiques. They are my reactions to what I have read and involve sharing my thoughts and feelings. That is how I approach the reading of all romantic poetry. We are asked to pick our favorites and that is what I try to do.

*Cow**Balloons**Type*

My review was written March 7, 2020 and stored in my review tool. We send the reviews out when the winners are announced and we are instructed to do so. If this is not timely, that is why.

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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