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Lovely Image in March



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* Hello Odessa Molinari ! I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest. Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?


*Cool**Idea* I thought of being compared to a fluffy cushion instead of a summer's day and it made me smile. Your whole poem made me smile.

I like the title. It's a reality check through the prism of loving eyes.

When I read and judge I look for originality and creativity and things that make me stop and reread. You certainly have that quality throughout, with a hint of the bard! I love the humor and the notion that we love for what is inside, not the frills. Of course, we all age so the love deepens in different directions as we expand. *Laugh* Expand our horizons, I mean.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

This is my favorite passage:

"So long as I can breathe and my eyes can see,
You'll be my valentine and this gives life to me."

Love is a long road if we are lucky and it has many surprises.

Loved your poetic and funny look at romance!

*Thumbsup*

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

P.S. My reviews are never meant to be harsh critiques or detailed editing forays or nitpicking about form and such. I saw no improvements to suggest or contradictory things to opine. I simply settled in and enjoyed my reading experience more than once.

Well done! Very clever!

Having fun with One Review at a Time in 2020! *Cow**Balloons**Type*

This review was written and stored in my review tool on March 7, 2020. It will be sent when we are instructed to send out our reviews for the contest.

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such


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