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That is a good chapter, it has information, characterization, and action. The pacing is good, it keeps moving well. I'm sorry captain cannuk was broken. I hope that Mrs reynard can get him fixed. I feel like it is one of his oldest, dearest, and only friends. I can't wait until the next chapter.
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