Hi Mr. Midnight , I found your writing at your request. Hopefully, this review will find you in good spirits.


On Title/Subject
Good title, again. I think you did a fine job on the titles. They match their content. Another interesting chapter.

General impressions
Inside the building again, reconnecting with Mr. Takahashi. And unexpectedly with Mercer in the files and on the photos. Interesting developments. The blasts were a bonus. Action driven, real good!

Favorite Parts
The part where Mr. T. is taking out the folder with intel on Merc. Great descriptions.

Suggestions
One thing: what is K.I.A? Please elaborate.

Final thoughts
A great chapter with a swift pace and good flow. Another interesting chapter in the sequel.

Keep up the good work, enjoy writing!

WakeUpAndLive



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