Hi Mr. Midnight , I found your writing at your request. Hopefully, this review will find you in good spirits.

On Title/Subject
Good title. It's getting serious in this chapter. A lot of action.

General impressions
Great chapter. The adrenaline is pumping heavily. Action is seriously bad-ass. Peter takes the reader with him during a real attack on the building. Very good descriptions. Dialogs are gripping.

Favorite Parts
That part in the staircase is awesome. I saw a lot of 911-footage and it felt the same, inside the building with a panicking crowd. Very well done.

Suggestions
None. Maintain this pace and flow in your other chapters.

Final thoughts
Great action chapter. I felt as if I was part of the chaos in the building.

Keep up the good work, enjoy writing!

WakeUpAndLive



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